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INNOCENT TEARS has been re-released.
It has enjoyed another full edit and an awesome new cover.
Here’s another little snippet.
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“Advice is what we ask for when we already
know the answer, but wish we didn’t.”
I moved a little further along – this is later in the day, but you will find out what else Teresa had in store for him.
Flynn walked into his kitchen, sweat trickling down his face, his back wet from perspiration and his breathing still ragged. He grabbed a bottle of water from the fridge and downed it in almost one go. Even jogging for a few kilometres didn’t clear his mind. He was still trying to comprehend what had happened earlier that day. Saz, his beautiful Saz, was dead. No more touching her beautiful skin. No more
feeling her warm lips. No more – anything! Wrong. There was something – Nadine.
A small girl who was a part of him. A small girl whom he had not known about,
and whom he was supposed to meet the following day. You have a daughter. The
words drummed through his head, and his usually calm and collected thoughts were doing a rollercoaster ride up there – it scared him.
feeling her warm lips. No more – anything! Wrong. There was something – Nadine.
A small girl who was a part of him. A small girl whom he had not known about,
and whom he was supposed to meet the following day. You have a daughter. The
words drummed through his head, and his usually calm and collected thoughts were doing a rollercoaster ride up there – it scared him.
He took a drink out of the fridge and tried to recall what had been said earlier.
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Wonderful panic, true emotional response. Love the snippet!
Thank you, Elizabeth. Glad you liked it.
What a shock he received, losing his childhood friend (sounds like much more than a friend), and also finding out he has a daughter. True emotions betrayed here.
Thank you, Karen. Yes, she was more than “just” a friend.
Wow, his word has changed in a sudden. Poor little girl though! I hope he can be there for her. Great snippet!
Yes, it has indeed. A big change. Thanks for stopping by, Veronica.
I found you. Looked around your new site. Very nice! Great snippet, too. His confusion and delayed grief come through.
Yeahhhhhh … so glad you found me. I’m not good with changes anymore … LOL … And thanks for your kind words re the snippet. Glad you liked it.
Wow. 🙁 You wrote the shock and confusing mix of emotions beautifully.
Aww, thank you Karysa. I appreciate your words.
Great job. Well done.
Hi there … thanks for coming over, Susanne 🙂
Poor guy. That’s a lot to take in. It was so well written.
Thank you so much, Elaine. I really appreciate it.
A lot to process there…good stuff.
Thank you, Todd. Appreciate it!
Quite a mix of emotions! I wonder why she didn’t tell him about their daughter?
There’s a reason for it, and we’ll find out later. Thanks for stopping by PT.
I could really feel the sense of panic in this scene.
Thank you, Cecilia.
The mother is dead–nice twist on the secret baby trope. Looking forward to seeing where he goes from here.
Thank you Joyce. Glad you liked it. And glad you found me “here” 🙂
Gosh he’s had a huge amount to absorb in such a short period of time… Very intense!
Thank you, Rachel. Yes, a lot to take in.
Wow–what a hook! And such a great job of introducing that information! Nicely done, Iris. 🙂
Thank you, Teresa. Glad you liked it.
Wow a dead love and a new daughter at the same time. That’s huge news!
Glad you liked it, Linda 😉
Oh yeah, that can certainly rattle someone and send their head reeling to find out they have a daughter. Great job!
Thank you. Glad you liked it! 🙂