FLY WITH ME
This story is still a WIP, so critique away. It’s set partly in Melbourne, Australia, and in New Zealand.
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Tiffany wasn’t sure how long she sat there before she was finally able to get up and reach the phone in the kitchen. Dialling a familiar number, it didn’t take long for someone to answer.
Tiffany hesitated for a second then quickly hung up. Checking the numbers by pushing the redial button, she pressed connect when she was sure. With her heartbeat up a notch, she focussed this time.
“Hello?” the person answered, this time with more irritation in his voice.
Confused, she asked, “Can I talk to Dylan, please?”
“He’s not home.”
“Who… who are you?”
“My name is Mat. Can I leave him a message?”
Puzzled for a split second, she racked her brain to put one and one together. This guy definitely had a little Kiwi accent in his voice. But who the hell was he?
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15 thoughts on “Snippet Sunday – FLY WITH ME – 02/10/2016 #romance #love #SnippetSunday”
Mat sounds rather calm and accommodating for an irritated guy or maybe I’m just really damn short when random people call my house…
He’s one very special “kiwi” 🙂
Thanks for stopping by, Aldrea.
Ooh, a mystery man! Looking forward to finding out who he is!
LOL … one very special person 😉 Thanks for stopping by, Joyce.
She’s still very nervous. At least she’s willing to speak to Mat.
There’s something about him …. 😉 Thanks for stopping by, Aurora.
Intriguing snippet. Can’t wait to learn more about these characters.
Glad you liked it, PT 🙂
Hmmm, who’s Mat and how does he play in? 🙂
Patience 🙂 We’ll find out soon. Thanks for stopping by Rose
Wonder who this Mat guy is?!
We’ll find out soon 🙂 Thanks for stopping by, Cecilia
Another wrinkle in the story! I’m enjoying this, excellent excerpt.
Mystery men are always fun. Hopefully it doesn’t mean trouble for her though. I wonder why she wants to talk to Dylan, and I love the “heartbeat up a notch” line.
Hahaha … thanks Daelyn. Glad you enjoyed the snippet 🙂