FLY WITH ME
This story is still a WIP, so critique away. It’s set partly in Melbourne, Australia, and in New Zealand.
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“I hit the redial button,” he replied nonchalantly.
A smile twitched at Tiffany’s lips. He was clever. And he cared. “It’s Tiffany. My name is Tiffany.”
“Nice meeting you Tiffany, even though it’s over the phone. So, you’re sure you’re okay?”
Tiffany hesitated, but noticed how talking to him calmed her. “Who are you?”
“My name’s Mat, but I’ve already told you.”
There was no malice in his voice. She sat down on the couch, her body slowly relaxing. “Dylan never mentioned someone called Mat.”
He laughed. “You know all his secrets?”
“No, but considering I’m his best friend, I believe, he’d mentioned a friend staying with him.”
“Let me think, I can’t recall him mentioning your name, either.”
His voice had a teasing tone and Tiffany started to like him. It was exactly what she needed after opening the door to the police.
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20 thoughts on “Snippet Sunday – FLY WITH ME – 16/10/2016 #romance #love #SnippetSunday”
I’m glad she has someone to talk to. Sounds like she really needs that right now.
Thanks, Karen. He’s a nice guy 🙂
I can certainly tell she’s relaxing…well done snippet!
Thanks Veronica. Glad you liked it.
Mat sounds like a good guy. I’m looking forward to getting to know him more.
You will find out more about him soon 🙂 Thanks, PT
I’m glad she’s warming up to him. He seems like a nice guy.
Thanks, Joyce 🙂
It’s good she feels relaxed when he talks.
Thanks Aurora. He’s good for her.
You’ve conveyed her growing comfort with him. I hope he’s completely worthy of her trust.
Thank you, Ed. I appreciate your comment.
What a nice sounding guy. She needs someone right now.
Yes she does indeed. Thank you for stopping by, Diane.
He seems nice.
He is 😉
I’m starting to really like Mat. Odd spelling for the name too, I would have expected another T on it. I wonder if there’s a reason for the different spelling?
My beta reader picked up on that, too 🙂 YOu’ll find out soon why it’s only one “t” Thanks for stopping by, Daelyn
Not sure if this is a duplicate comment or if I just lost the previous one.
I like the comfortable way he is talking and the way he seems to put her at ease. He sounds confident and yet not conceited. I like him.
He’s a great guy … very likeable … glad you like him 🙂 Thanks for stopping by, Chelle.