Snippet Sunday – FLY WITH ME – 16/10/2016 #romance #love #SnippetSunday




This story is still a WIP, so critique away. It’s set partly in Melbourne, Australia, and in New Zealand.

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“I hit the redial button,” he replied nonchalantly.
A smile twitched at Tiffany’s lips. He was clever. And he cared. “It’s Tiffany. My name is Tiffany.”
“Nice meeting you Tiffany, even though it’s over the phone. So, you’re sure you’re okay?”
Tiffany hesitated, but noticed how talking to him calmed her. “Who are you?”
“My name’s Mat, but I’ve already told you.”
There was no malice in his voice. She sat down on the couch, her body slowly relaxing. “Dylan never mentioned someone called Mat.”
He laughed. “You know all his secrets?”
“No, but considering I’m his best friend, I believe, he’d mentioned a friend staying with him.”
“Let me think, I can’t recall him mentioning your name, either.”
His voice had a teasing tone and Tiffany started to like him. It was exactly what she needed after opening the door to the police.

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20 thoughts on “Snippet Sunday – FLY WITH ME – 16/10/2016 #romance #love #SnippetSunday”

    1. My beta reader picked up on that, too 🙂 YOu’ll find out soon why it’s only one “t” Thanks for stopping by, Daelyn

  1. Not sure if this is a duplicate comment or if I just lost the previous one.

    I like the comfortable way he is talking and the way he seems to put her at ease. He sounds confident and yet not conceited. I like him.

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