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After spending a few weeks in Tasmania and thought the place deserves a story. It’s still very much a WIP, but hopefully it’ll turn into something really good. Today’s snippet is still in Alex’s POV.
He studied her face. Her struggle and disappointment was obvious not only through her voice, but also in her demeanour and the sagged shoulders. He pondered about the offer that lay on his lips. He looked over to his father who was tinkering away at the car oblivious about her newest misfortune. Hans was in his sixties and could’ve easily retired a few years ago, but he liked to help people. His services were the most affordable around, because this wasn’t just work for him, but his life, something he loved.
He gazed back at Leonie. “What’s in St. Helens?”
She shrugged. “The scenery. Far away from civilisation. Peace and quiet.”
Nodding, he gave a smile. Again, he thought about his idea. He understood, because these were exactly the reasons he’d bought a house near St. Helens a few years back.
“I have a house in Binalong Bay you could stay for a few days. I’ll only be heading that way next weekend.”
Eyes wide, she said, “I can’t accept that.”
With a lift of his shoulder, he asked, “Why not?”
He choked back a chuckle. “You’re aware this is not really an answer.”
Standing straight now and turning towards him, she explained, “There are many reasons. You don’t know me. I don’t know you. I can’t just stay at your house. What if I were a criminal.”
Rubbing his temple with his finger, he let out a soft laugh. “You just told me you’re not running, but trying to have a holiday.”
“I could’ve lied.”
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8 thoughts on “#SnippetSunday “What if I were a criminal.” #romancebooks #Sundayblog #amwriting”
I like the fact that your characters come off as real people rather than impossibly perfect archetypes. It makes the story believable.
Aww … thank you. what a great compliment. 🙂
I think the truth is somewhere between running and a holiday. Love the flow of the conversation.
Thank you. And, yes, somewhere inbetween …
I like his offer, I like her hesitation, and I like the way the story is flowing. Great snippet!
Aww … thanks Veronica 🙂
Makes me wonder if she’s doing a little bit of hiding and trying to have a holiday. 🙂 Great snippet. Love the banter.
Not really hiding, but of course she’s a bit wary 🙂 Thanks for stopping by Karen.