FLY WITH ME
This is Tiffany’s story, who receives a call from the police one morning forcing her to deal with a chapter from her past, which she is unhappy to revisit. When she calls her friend Dylan, it’s Mat from New Zealand she ends up talking to.
This is still a WIP, so critique away. It’s set partly in Melbourne, Australia, and in New Zealand.
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After a few more pleasantries, they all stood and shook hands. The relief that washed over Tiffany as soon as she exited the room was so intense, it left her dizzy, and she held on to Dylan for a brief minute.
“Are you all right?”
“It’s the adrenaline causing me a rush of light-headedness.”
“Need a drink of water?”
“No. Just let’s get the hell out of here. Can’t say it’s a place I like.”
He chuckled as he checked his watch.
“And you have the appointment to check on junior.”
Dylan placed an arm around her shoulder and gently pulled her closer to him. Placing a kiss on her forehead, he said against her skin, “I’ll kill you if you spill the beans to anybody.”
“Yes, honey. My lips are sealed.”
As soon as they stepped out of the building, Tiffany said, “I’ll get the bus home. There’s a bus stop only a few minutes from here.”
She nodded and moved out of his arm. “A hundred percent. You’ll better get to the appointment.”
“I owe you.”
Shaking her head, she replied, “No you don’t. I wouldn’t even know how to thank you for coming along today.”
He took her head into his hands and placed another kiss on her forehead. “Promise me you’ll be fine on that bus.”
“Josh’s dead, remember.”
“Yes, but the way it sounds not by choice.”
“What are you saying?”
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18 thoughts on “Snippet Sunday – FLY WITH ME – 26/03/2017 #romance #love #SnippetSunday #SundayBlogShare”
Dead–but not by choice. Uh, that leaves the question of how and who. Hmmm…
to be revealed later in the book 🙂 thanks for stopping by, Gem!
A strange statement at the end.
Not really. He’s just concerned about her safety. Thanks for stopping by, Aurora.
More things to be discovered, obviously! Enjoyed the excerpt…
Glad you liked it, Veronica. 🙂
Wait, what? Great snippet, Iris. 🙂
LOL … Thanks for stopping by, Siobhan.
What is he saying? I want to know.
She might be in danger … 🙂 Thanks for stopping by, Karen.
You left us with a cliffhanger. What does he know that she doesn’t?
He’s thinking a little further, that’s all 😉 Thanks for stopping by, Ed.
That last bit was a bit ominous. I assume he thinks that Josh’s murderer might be after her next. Great snippet.
You assume right, Jennifer 🙂 Thanks for stopping by!
Oooh! Ominous last line!
Indeed 🙂 Thanks for stopping by, PT.
Yes, what IS he implying? That someone may be looking to come for her next. I sense foreshadowing.
Thanks for stopping by 🙂